Okay So for class We have to write a letter to someone we love like gf/bf/family etc. I need help with making it perfect, this letter is for my gf..

Letter: Hey it's Alex I just wanted to say a few things. I really love you a lot you're the best. Every time we talk you're warm beautiful voice gets stuck In side my head, The reaction of the poem I wrote for you was priceless(The poem:You are what I desire they way you say you love me puts me on fire, you're kind thoughtful ways makes me wanna hold you each and every day. You're eyes shine brighter then the stars, look up there you are!! Before we met I was unsure but now I know you're mine for sure. Lightest day darkest night I'm her to hold you in every fight. I prayed for a miracle and here you came you name is forever planted in my brain. When I'm sad you're always there now I know you really care. My time is done I'm saying Goodbye I'll never forget you you'll always be mine) You're mine and always will be don't ever think I'm leaving you I would never to me you're just too perfect all you're beautiful in-perfections and all you're flawless edges are the best I can't stress enough of how much I care you are so funny. You call you're self things that are not true you need to stop you're whole existence is wonderful