I wrote a poem for english can you guys tell me your opinion? I sit and ponder at the dark blue sky
How the stars twinkle in midnight
The moon sits up so high
Always shining so bright

A nice breeze shifts the air
There is a little chill here and there
But my eyes continue to stare
The stars seem to flare

The sky is covered with a nice glow
Some shoot to and fro
All the stars put on a show
Each one appears to grow

The moons light starts to fade
As a fog of clouds takes its place
The wind comes to its aid
The clouds leave without a trace

Only if I could be so near
There would be nothing for me to fear
Everything would be so clear
I might even start to tear

The water glistens under the moon
It sings its own little tune
The sounds are always very boon
I think it has its own rune

Even the stars gather around
But the moon seems to be the host
They all enjoy the beautiful sound
But never do they boast

Some of the stars start to fly
Leaving trails of light across the sky
I cannot help but start to cry
It is truly beauty to my eye

They are as bright as they can be
So much I can barely see
They all look so free
I cannot help but to show some glee
As I look out towards North
All my pain starts to ease
I watch the clouds come forth
The night sky is my peace

If only I was at the beach
Oh how much the stars would preach
It all seems out of reach
But nobody would be a creech

The feeling of sand under my feet
That would be such a treat
The ocean smells very sweet
And the stars look perfectly neat

I would lie in the sand
And look at ocean
It all would be so grand
It must be a magical potion

-hannah wright