Should New York City New York be capitalized

No it shouldn't

Explanation:

"Unless "city" is part of the name (i.e. "Carson City" or "New York City"), it's not capitalized after the city's name. Even used before (as in "City of"), the capitalization only happens if the title of the city in question actually has that name ("City of London", "City of New York")."

the future of her and bobby i think is her name got this book 1 year ago forgot her name but yeah

hope i you : )

the right ones are in bold.

daintly refers to the fact she was reaching for what she ate, not necessarily what she is like.

greatest charm as in she possessed (=had) the greatest charm.

pleasant (her demeanor)

speaking (of her sensibility)

dead refers to the hypothetical mouse.

bleeding refers to the hypothetical mouse.