Can someone proofread my poem and make sure its good, please? The fresh smell of the air, and
the blissful green wooded hills,
if you keep standing there
you might get a peek
at a bird as it refills.
Venture out no further
as you may disturb the small deer's slumber
instead, admire the skitter
of the tiny little mice
scampering towards their home.

awesome

Explanation:

i love it

the sentence does not violate the phrase structure second rule (introduced by noam chomsky) because noun phrases consist of a determiner such as a, the or every, and a noun. in the sentence, the noun phrase the cake includes a determiner (the) and a noun (cake).

on the other hand, the first rule indicates that a sentence encloses a noun phrase, followed by a verb phrase. the example sentence can be analysed as follows:

john (n) + ate (v) + the (det) + cake (n).