What is wrong with each of the following thesis statements. Then revise each thesis to make it more effective. 1.In this paper, I will discuss the causes of asthma. which include exposure to smoke, chemicals, and allergic reactions. 2. Jogging is an enjoyable aerobic sport 3. The crime rate is increasing in U. S cities. 4. Living in an apartment has many advantages 5. Children's toys can be dangerous, instructional Or creative

hi,   i believe the outlines that were supposed to be showing at the sentences, are not. could you highlight them somehow?

different routes can lead to sammy to different places, with different roads.   if you check a map, you can see the routes.   try to make connections of the places and count how many there are.   hope this : )

bearing in mind that painting during the 1700s was a medium used by the artists at courts in order to depict the kings or queens' portraits as well as their power and influence, the painting of king louis xiv as shown in sugar changed the world supports this claim. in this painting it is possible to observe three examples of wealth, power, and influence.

the king is wearing elaborate clothing made of fancy materials.

the king has a sword and sits next to a helmet.

the king sits next to a crown, which symbolizes his power.

wearing expensive clothes, carrying a sword and posing next to a crown are symbols of wealth, power and influence which clearly represent the importance of monarchy during those times.