Can someone give me an original example of a persuasive essay with 5 paragraphs with just 200 words?

Have you ever came home on a tiring day,  then realising that there’s homework to do?! I’m sure, many have experienced this. I stand firmly in my opinion that teachers shouldn’t give homework, I intend to discuss why.

Firstly, enough information is discussed in class; we cannot remember everything. Piling students up with homework can make what has been taught forgotten, or worse, making them lose their willingness to learn. You can’t expect us to remember everything you have taught us!

Secondly, homework takes up lots of physical engagement time. When you do homework, you’re on a chair; sitting too long can cause pains. Furthermore, it can cause diseases that wouldn’t happen if we have time to move around.

Furthermore, it stresses students out and can cause mental health issues. They can affect our whole life immensely! Stuff like focusing, thinking or anything, you name it! I’m sure that you don’t want to have these issues; students don’t as well.

My statement won’t be swayed, homework should not be given to children. It can cause problems along the way, problems that teacher’s themselves could despise as well. If they tried to be in our shoes, they will certainly know why.

Exactly 200 words! Hope it helps <3

ok if it wasn't the hans one it was probably c or he thought the mountain was collapsing on them.