I need this quick Read each of the following “thesis statements” and determine whether or not it is a true and correct thesis statement. If it is, write YES and move on to the next one. If it is not, write NO, the rule number that it breaks, and then revise it to turn it into an acceptable thesis.

1. The government should not limit the amount of financial aid a student can receive for college.

2. Why would you want to live in northwest Florida?

3. The advantages of going to college.

4. This essay is about the reasons you should take care of your health.

5. Jim Carrey is the funniest actor in Hollywood.

6. While there may be people who prefer hip-hop, R&B, or adult contemporary music, there is no doubt that rock music is the best.

7. Florida is a state.

8. Most movies contain too much violence, and violence on television is causing the crime rate to rise.

9. Mt. Kilimanjaro is over twenty-thousand feet high.

10. What is so important about graduating from high school?

Read the following essay prompts. Write a thesis statement that would be appropriate to respond to each one.

11. Should Florida have a death penalty?

12. Write an essay about a time you learned a valuable lesson