After reading Barrio Boy, students were asked to write a paragraph about the author's experience of moving to America. Trudy wrote the topic sentence below.
Ernesto has to learn a lot of things when he first gets to America.
Which answer option shows the best way to revise the above sentence for clarity and detail?
O Shortly after arriving in America, Ernesto begins learning some basic English phrases and the differences between
pesos and dollars.
O Just after a few days of getting to America, Ernesto learns to say "please" in English and to ask how much
something costs.
When Ernesto first arrives in the United States, he learns about a variety of many new things.
O After moving to the United States, José teaches Ernesto a lot of helpful stuff about living there.