How should I make this sentence make more sense? I don’t know if I should fix the semicolon or if I should make it 2 separate sentences... “By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3; because although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.”

By seeing all her actions and the way she thinks, I would say she is at stage 3 because, although she doesn’t want to do all these things, she still wants approval from her parents.

Explanation:

I took off the ; and added a coma after "because" so that "although she doesn't want to do all these things" is like it's in ().

You could also make this two sentences.

Hope this helps!

might need to ask questions people no or have read somthing about.

it states the claim