Read the student’s response, which argues in favor of the local skate park. Then, read the new information. How could the student adjust the response in light of this new information? Write a paragraph that explains your answer.

The student is in favor of a skating park, but a letter to the editor argues that it does not offer anything to people who cannot skate already. The student can adjust the response by providing some solutions to this problem. He or she could recommend volunteer-run skating classes to newcomers. The student could also suggest that the skating park include other facilities, such as a basketball court, for people who do not know how to skate.

Explanation:

sample response

the following key ideas correctly express the key sentence.

restate key idea: most people can learn to swim in ten short lessons.

restate key idea: the majority of water-accident victims require mouth-to-mouth breathing.

restate key idea: an empty, tightly closed gallon jug will support a tired swimmer.  

restate key idea: first aid is to prevent accidents as well as assist in rescue.

explanation: the key idea needs to have the same topic as the key sentence (drowning and safety).

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