It was the last soccer game of the season. Darius was the goalie for his team. They really wanted to be this champions. Darius's team was ahead by one point. His team was counting on him. He could not let the other team score. A kid on the other team kicked
the ball at the net. Darius jumped in the air. He caught the ball! His team won the game. They were soccer champions!
Which is the best way to retell the story above?

what makes a hero is someone who tries and acres and then to save people and it’s not their jobs to save them just a normal person that has no experts of saving people would jump in to action without it twice about doing it. me that’s the defection of a hero!

her eyes water as she let her go

her mothers hand goes limp

face white and pale

lips blue and stale

she is gone

sadness fills her body

she collapses to her knees

as her mothers disease leaves the girl alone