Read the sentence. cambria sang in her school’s talent showcase three songs making her grandparents proud. which is the best revision of this sentence?
cambria made her grandparents proud when she sang three songs in her school’s talent showcase.
making her grandparents proud,
cambria in her school’s talent showcase sung three songs.
three songs sung in the school’s talent showcase made cambria’s grandparents proud. cambria sung three songs making her grandparents proud of the school’s talent showcase.

Ineed . identify the item that shows sharp and vivid details rather than vague and general ones (put a or b for your answer.) a. my brother doesn’t know the value of money. he buys new things, even though his old ones are still perfectly good. he recently took his girlfriend on a trip. they stayed at a nice hotel and ate all their meals out. while they were there, he proposed marriage to her and gave her an engagement ring. b. my brother bought a new car this year, even though his last car was only three years old and running well. he recently took his girlfriend to hawaii for a week. they stayed at a hilton hotel right on the beach and ate dinner by candlelight in elegant gourmet restaurants. on their last night there, he surprised her with a two-carat diamond ring.