HELP ITS DUE RN 15 POINTS IM GONNA FAIL Revise this paragraph and tell me what you fixed (Introduction Paragraph) "Science data shows that over the past few years there has been an increase in swarms of Mnemiopsis jellyfish”. Mnemiopsis jellyfish numbers are rapidly increasing every day! Because of this, many problems have happened. For example, power plants can get shut down from Mnemiopsis jellyfish getting clogged in the system. This problem effects everyone! There are many possible solutions to solve this. Such as, the Bereo jellyfish. The Bereo jellyfish like to eat Mnemiopsis jellyfish. Because of this, the Bereo can create a more balanced ecosystem and limit this problem.

Read sentence 13 from the draft. some plants retain a great deal of their foliage through much of the spring and summer, but the leaves do not retain their green color for long. which detail would be best to add after sentence 13 to develop the topic? a. since the green color of the leaves that are bright and abundant during the warmer months will disappear by the time it is fall, it is important that the leaves are trimmed and kept freshly cut so that they will last for as long as possible. b. while the temperature outside may dictate when the fall colors of leaves appear, it is only one of many environmental factors that play a part in the changing of colors from green leaves to fall-colored leaves during the cooler months. c. if people want to enjoy the green color of leaves longer, trees should be planted where the environment is warmer and the days longer because chlorophyll in the leaves can only be manufactured and replaced with sunlight and warmth. d. the green chlorophyll normally masks the fall-colored pigments during the warmer months, but as sunlight becomes less abundant and trees become frozen, the fall colors of leaves become more visible as chlorophyll disappears.