Read the draft model. Use the questions that follow the draft to help you think about what relevant details and evidence you can add ( have to clue every question. ) Then rewrite the draft.
Draft: Mom and Dad were tired because they had three kids and full-time jobs. I got my big brothers to agree that we would cook dinner twice a week. Everything is better now.
1. What facts, examples, or quotations could you add to help readers understand the family's situation?
2. What details could you add to help readers understand the narrator's actions?
3. What details would help readers better understand and visualize the conclusion?
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