Choosing the right dog to adopt is a big responsibility that takes some thought and planning. To begin with, there are hundreds of breeds of
dogs available to pet owners. Some of these breeds have a lot of
energy and need lots of walks and space to run. Also, pet owners
should consider the size of their dog. In addition, it is important to
consider the level of grooming a dog needs.
How could this excerpt from an essay best be revised to clarify meaning and
enhance style?
A. Maintain a formal style.
B. Use transitions to clarify the flow of ideas.
O c. Clarify the topic and purpose in the topic sentence.
D. Use evidence that supports the topic sentence more clearly!