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A few months ago when i was walking down the street i saw the crosswalks where wet with paint and some people walking around with paintbrushes, so i decided to see what was going on. They told me that they were doing sidewalk paintings, so i asked if i could join in and they said i could but i would have to put down some tape first. Once that was done i picked out a color and just did what i wanted to my 2 panels of sidewalk. When we were done for the day i got a really cool coupon for a craft store in appleton. I had a great time making friends and painting things for all to enjoy!

If this were a fictionalized account, instead of a memoir, which might be the opening sentence? a) i am not your prisoner. b) i find myself in prison. c) you have taken me prisoner. d) black hawk had been taken prisoner.

Read the corporate document. all employees of cozy clothes ltd. are entitled to a 40 percent discount on regularly priced merchandise and a 20 percent discount on sale-priced merchandise. to apply this discount to an employee purchase, follow this procedure: 1. enter the purchaser’s employee id number into the cash register when prompted. 2. apply the appropriate discount. 3. apply sales tax. 4. print an additional copy of the sales receipt. initial both copies. 5. add the additional copy to the register drawer to be included with the nightly closeout report. what is the purpose of the numbering in this document? to indicate steps in a process to emphasize supporting ideas to signal the text’s main ideas to show the meaning of policies

(hedda gabler; act 1, pp. 19-20) based on the first few lines that hedda speaks in the excerpt above, what do you learn about hedda from her interaction with miss tesman? your answer should be at least 250 words.**will mark brainliest**