I need a Haiku poem about broken hearts..
Can someone help..?

It feels so empty

Like all of me left with them

Why do I miss them?

Painful apathy

That is how it feels inside

All because of you

Tears like fiery rain,

Shock, like a deer in headlights,

She is naive no more.

Explanation:

I typed these just now, so they should work for you. Let me know if you want more.

sensory details?

so i`m assuming you are writing something from a bats (the animal) point of view. if this is the case, you can use sights, sounds, feelings, and tastes.

and idk what you mean by domain, but all of the sensory details will depend on where the bat is.

a bat doesn't see color very well, so its surroundings will be dulled.

it can hear super well. so maybe it can hear the insects on the ground

feelings. you can imagine how a bat would feel from its perspective. it all depends on where it lives.

maybe it can taste the salt in the air, or smell water, or something. all of these details are completely dependent on where it is located.

hope this .

i suggest it is anadiplosis