Read this rough draft Alice gets more grown up on her journey through the
Looking-Glass land, like how she does not cry as much
toward the end
Revise this draft to reflect a formal style.
O Alice gets more grown up on her journey through
the Looking-Glass land, because she does not cry
always toward the end
Alice gets more grown up on her journey through
the Looking-Glass land, she does not get all
emotional toward the end
Alice matures on her journey through the Looking-
Glass land; for example, she learns to control her
emotions
Alice matures on her journey through the Looking-
Glass land, and she even does not cry toward the
end

answer: it is true that students often work and do household chores, but managing homework in addition to other responsibilities students learn to organize their time efficiently and prioritize their studies.

the first argument attacks those who disagree, asking them to be "realistic" and "accept facts." this is not conducive to healthy debate and disagreement. the second one only takes into account a section of the student population, and ignores the other one. finally, the third option offers only anecdotal evidence. it is only the last option that provides a well-constructed argument in a persuasive way.

that passage is from dr. king