Revision is: A. looking for mistakes and errors in a piece of writing. B. deciding on the purpose and audience of a work. C. the quality of a writer's writing style and tone. D. the process of editing and polishing a written work.

"get off of your lazy bum and come running with me or i'm dumping this pitcher of water on u " u say with a smile. she thinks your joking so she ignores you about 10 seconds later shes screaming wile water is dripping everywhere you say "here comes the second one! " then you here her say okay, your such a j e r k ! ill be ready in 5 put the pitcher down " she say in an angry tone. and you smile in victory

good enough?

pulling in the reader is important