CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME ON A SHORT STORY NOT TO SHORT 9-11 SENTENCES (MORE THEN A PARAGRAPH) MAKE SURE TO USE DIALOGUE AND FEW TO MINIMAL ERRORS INCLUDING PUNCTUATION ABOUT A GIRL HER FAMILY AND A COUPLE OF FRIENDS GOING TO NYC NEW YORK YOU CAN MAKE UP HOW MANY PEOPLE FRIENDS AND THE CHARACTERS NAMES A STARTED A LITTLE BIT OF IT ALREADY THIS IS HOW FAR I'VE GOTTEN SO YOU CAN JUST ADD ON TO IT. I have never been on vacation for this long but I was really excited and looking forward to this trip me my family and a couple of friends were going to new york for a week the car ride there with my brother, mom, and dad was good when we arrived a in new york...