I wrote this poem, is there anything I can change?

:0 naah. i think the only change would be the font (makes it hard to read lol

but like

wow

just

wow

its beutifu! you reeally have a talent :D

i hope the world gets to hear this one day

Put a comma after word and fix this line because it doesn't make sense "I never said the word if I don

’t mean it and with you I

did, "

Maybe use a better vocabulary, make the words stronger. You can go to a thesaurus to find bigger words.

Also you say "did" quite a bit, but it kind of fits with the poem.

Other than that, it looks good to me.

Explanation:

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)