1. In the text field below, write a first draft of your critique based on your outline and notes. Your critique should be at least 400 words long. 2. After a break, reread what you have written. Make any corrections in content that seem necessary. Then check your work for errors, looking at these areas:

It is very important to promote self esteem in young children

Leslie would probably have come with us if she didn’t work all summer. which is the verb phrase?

You have to go. you have to, yer the only doctor. go ahead on, you," bruh fox say. big doc rabbit went down to the brook again. the water was so cool and ribbly and it kept the crock of cream so fresh and cold. doc rabbit drank about half of the cream this time. then he went back up to brother fox with the hard labor of raisin the roof. heard tell about this phrase remind readers that these stories were usually told, not read. which line from the excerpt is an example of personification?