The end of my story: it was an effort in vain and he remained a puppet. (A little later in the week) Pinocchio left his house in a hurry to go to class. During the break he was alone in his corner while the others, continued mocking him. But during all this time, what this classmates still hadn’t understood was that Pinocchio’s appearance didn’t bother him anymore, while laughing at the others thinking. « You laugh because I’m different, I laugh because you’re all the same. » At the end of this story, Pinocchio and his grandfather lived happily ever after. Hello
I have to make this for tomorrow it's a story revisit can you tell you if it's good and if possible add some linking words and indirect speech and a morale pleasee.