Can someone please give any recommendations to make this better?/edit it (its a persuasive essay on wether its better to dream big or be realistic)

“Every decision I’ve ever made that led me to the right space and place in my life, I got there because I relied on that inner voice.” Oprah Winfrey had a rough start to her life but didn’t let bad things get in her way because she let herself follow her dreams. Dreaming big will always be the most influential thing in a person's life.

For Instance, In the movie Ratatouille, Remy wanted to be a chef, but he was a rat. His family thought that it was foolish and forbade him from pursuing his dream. His dream motivated him to try harder than ever before. Even though Remy was a rat, he became a chef because he dreamed big. If he didn't dream big, or if he had let his family dishearten him, he wouldn't have ever been able to follow his dream.

Another example of this is Oprah Winfrey. Growing up she was abused by her different family members. She dreamed of making a better life for herself. When she was older she received many rejections. After many failures, her big dreams inspired her to take the next steps in her career. She quit her job not knowing what would happen next and eventually became an international sensation.

Dreaming big will always be something that can give people motivation and create excitement. On the other hand, being realistic can sometimes be a better option. It prepares them for the absolute worst. Sometimes it's hard to be positive in the worst situations. By being Practical people can save themselves from a letdown and be a little more prepared for the unknown.

Being ambitious and dreaming big is a key part of accomplishing seemingly impossible things. It gives people motivation and inspiration. Dreaming big will always be the most influential thing in a person's life.