Hello people of I enjoy writing stories, and I had an idea that I should turn dreams I have into stories (editing them obviously cuz I have some weird dreams lol) but how does this sound for just the summary of the story: people with magical powers (specific ones and/or multiple) a young girl and her best friends (boy) with newly found powers are thrown into a magical world. There is a “ga ng” or group of “e vil” magic users. There is a school for all of these people, with dorms/buildings designed for each of the different focuses of magic. (fairies?) member of the e vil ones stole my goldfish and used it in a ritu al, but probably not something to put in the story lma0). He is bad for her, but she is intrigued.
ignore the goldfish part idk why, but that's what happened in the dream lol anyways, does this sound like it could be a good story?

Which excerpt from chapter 3 of the strange case of dr. jekyll and mr. hyde illustrates a character vs. character conflict? hosts loved to detain the dry lawyer, when the light-hearted and loose-tongued had already their foot on the threshold; they liked to sit a while in his unobtrusive company. the large handsome face of dr. jekyll grew pale to the very lips, and there came a blackness about his eyes. “i do not care to hear more,” said he. “this is a matter i thought we had agreed to drop.” “my good utterson,” said the doctor, “this is very good of you, this is downright good of you, and i cannot find words to you in. i believe you fully; i would trust you before any man alive, ay, before myself.” but i do sincerely take a great, a very great interest in that young man; and if i am taken away, utterson, i wish you to promise me that you will bear with him and get his rights for him.”