Thursday 1 Going to the State Fair in the early days of fall was a perfect way to spend a Thursday, 2 For example, the temperature Wald
comfortable 69 degrees. "It was a good idea to wear short sleeves and a light jacket that could be taken off easily in the
afternoon. In addition, the lines for the best rides were at a minimum because only school groups who scheduled in advance
attended this special fair experience. SFurthermore, the price was right! You could ride any ride all day for one price. "The
variety of fair foods completed the experience. i saw someone eating fried Kool-aid! 'This year, I chose to stick with elephant
ears and spiral spuds, 10But who knows, maybe next year
. 10our school's annual tradition of going to the fair cannot be topped.
Which sentence provides commentary information for elaboration of a concrete detail?
A)
81 saw someone eating fried Kool-aid!

what: when quoting a source, use the author’s words verbatim, or word-for-word. this means you shouldn’t change any grammar, punctuation, spelling, etc. put quotations around the words to tell your reader where the quote begins and where it ends.

you also need to acknowledge the author. for example, if using mla format for your research paper, you should have in-text citations with the author’s name and page number listed at the end of each quote.

when: use quotations to provide concrete examples to support your claims. using direct quotations is a great way to build your credibility on the subject. it’s also a good idea to quote your source when the author states things in a powerful way. if you think he or she said it best, then use the exact words to share the ideas.

example: in the short story “a jury of her peers”, mrs. hale compares mrs. wright to her caged bird, saying “she—come to think of it, she was kind of like a bird herself. real sweet and pretty, but kind of timid and—fluttery. how—she—did—change” (glaspell).

paraphrasing

what: paraphrasing differs from quoting because you restate the passage in your own words. since you don’t use the author’s words, you don’t need to use quotation marks. however, you still need to acknowledge the author for his or her ideas.

when paraphrasing a text, you should communicate the full meaning of the text; don’t change the meaning. it can be a condensed version of the text, or it could end up being longer than the source it’s paraphrasing.

when: you use paraphrasing when you take notes, or explain a chart or diagram to someone. paraphrasing highlight the important parts of a larger text. it also allows you to simplify the ideas for your readers.

example:

original: “it was no ordinary thing that called her away–it was probably further from ordinary than anything that had ever happened in dickson county. but what her eye took in was that her kitchen was in no shape for leaving: her bread all ready for mixing, half the flour sifted and half unsifted” (glaspell).

paraphrase: as mrs. hales walks around mrs. wright’s home, she notices that the kitchen is in disarray as if she was in the middle of baking bread (glaspell).

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