Write a paper (at least 400 words) using proper research and note-taking techniques (see "Taking Effective Notes"). Here is your goal for this assignment:

Plan, write, and revise an essay

Compile information about one of the following topics.

photography as a hobby
the college I would like to attend
a career I would like to pursue
an automobile I would like to own
a place I would like to visit

In writing the paper, remember to document your sources properly, using MLA format. As usual, you are expected to use correct standard English in your paper. Revise and proofread carefully.

type of error:

the error in the sentence is a "dangling modifier". a dangling modifier is a phrase, word or clause that "dangles" because there is not target to modify. in this case, "after mopping the floor" is the dangling modifier since it has no word to modify. the noun "house" cannot mop the floor; therefore there is a mistake in the writing of the sentence.

at the beginning of the story, elisa just has the small idea of wanting more attention, but as the story progressed, her desire for more attention grew larger. before she talked to the man with the wagon she was just focused on her chrysanthemums but when she talked to him and got some attention she enjoyed it, so she decided to get all dolled up for henry. but when they were on the way to dinner she was so upset because she saw the flowers on the side of the road and realized the man didn't take interest in her like she thought.

i would say b. good luck!

incoherently means without logical or meaningful connection; disjointed rambling an incoherent sentence. characterized by such thought or language.