Can you guys tell me if this is good and if I need to edit anything pls

I think that is rlly good and there is nothing u need to add.

Explanation:

i don't really know the circumstances. i personally think not due to it not being fair for all parties and how hated i'd become if i thought it was a good thing.

i love cake

and don't hate

i know i'm fat

but what's wrong with that

i cant rap

but im sure ya know that

its just for fun

so quit hatin' son

~courtney