Can someone help me plz. can someone make my writing flow better. (easier to read) I'm wringing a speech for someone who passed away in my book for school.

We are gathered here today to remember my husband, troy, and celebrate his life.
For those who don’t know me, I’m Rose. Troy was my husband who I loved very much.
As you know my husband troy cheated on me but I forgive him. in this time I got the daughter I always wanted and started to go to church, found a new activity of my own. If it wasn’t for him I wouldn’t get any of these things. Troy was a bold man with a bold opinion about death.

Hello everyone my name is Rose Troy I am (first name here) Troy's wife

We are gathered here today in the love and memories my husband (first name here) troy, and celebrate his life.  Troy was my husband who I loved very much and was very dear to me and I miss him so very much.

As you may not know my husband troy cheated on me but I forgive him. Now I have a very lovely daughter that I have always wanted. I always wanted and started to go to church, found a new activity of my own. If it wasn’t for him I wouldn’t be able to do any of these things. Troy was a bold man with a bold opinion about death.

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