Highlight or underline the collective noun in each of the sentences below. 1. An angry crowd assembled in front of the church.
2. My uncles hope to raise a flock of sheep.
3. Our class voted to have a spring picnic.
4. Melissa applauded the performance of the orchestra,
5. What do you think about the reaction of the audience?
6. A company of dancers will entertain us first.
7. The attorneys persuaded the jury to acquit the defendant,
8. Later, the trio played three interesting songs.
9. A squadron of soldiers surrounded the building,
10. Dozens of complaints were sent to the committee.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.