Anthony's analytical essay points out the importance of family ties in a novel he read recently. In the novel, a young boy becomes a teenager and gets involved with a gang,
He is also quite interested in cars, and finally leaves the gang when his uncle gets him a job at a motor parts factory. The first five paragraphs of Anthony's essay summarize the story in great detail. The essay ends with a sentence that states Anthony's interpretation of the boy's decision to leave the gang. What advice would help Anthony Improve his
analytical essay?

Move the interpretation statement to the beginning of the essay, and use the story's details tosupport that claim,

Just read your essay to make sure that all of the sentences How together well and are
punctuated correctly

Explain what parts of the main character's life were the most difcult to help readers feel more
sorry for him.

Read the novel again, and look for information to add about other characters in the story, to
round out your summary

Move the interpretation statement to the beginning of the essay, and use the story's details to support that claim,

Explanation: A analytical essay revolves around the claim, you need to state your claim and then back it up with evidence from the story.  

through negative experiences we learn many things its sort of like karma if u do something bad to someone and u get a consequence u dont like the next time u wont do it again and as for positive ur not really learning anything and another example for negativity people didnt want barrack obama as president because they thought he was the worst and he was taking but now we have donald trump   and hes   is not anyone and shut down the government over sum petty stuff unlike barrack obama who shut down the government because they did not want to give health care to the community and now these people who want him out want him in now

the answer is mary made mudpies on monday.

remember alliteration is the occurrence of the same letter or sound at the beginning of adjacent or closely connected words.