Which question would help improve the development of ideas in an essay? A)Are ideas clearly connected with transitions?
B)How much support is provided in each paragraph?
C)Where can I make language more specific?
D)Have I cited sources where I used them in my text? Please help! Thank you!

use the headings to create an overview of the main points.

i think it could possibly be b

the main character of "the secret life of walter mitty" retreats into a false pretense as a means escape from his mundane reality -- this is a flagrant issue seen in societies abroad, typically found in young adults and it is robbing our youths of their childhood.

explanation:

a thesis -- a well developed, formal thesis is required to be one sentence long. there are many themes in "the secret life of walter mitty" and i had resolved to give you one of the simpler ones while still honing it with class.

b and d

explanation: