I will mark you brainliest What revisions are most necessary to improve
sentence fluency in this passage? Select three options.

O using complete, grammatically correct sentences

Beginning more sentences with prepositional phrases

O using transitions to clarify the connections between
ideas

correcting run-on sentences by creating shorter
sentences

O combining short sentences to create compound and
complex sentences

using complete, grammatically correct sentences.

Explanation:

if you use complete sentences then it is will help improve sentence fluency.

the answer should be d) he was one of those young thousands who greeted the war with a certain amount of relief, welcoming the liberation from webs of tangled emotion" since it is the best option because it shows his desire to free himself. 

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