English, 04.12.2020 19:20 johnb9163

Read the passage. I was waiting in line at the department store return counter. I got more and more frustrated. Calls were constantly being taken by the clerk on her cell phone.

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As I waited in line at the department store’s return counter, I became more and more frustrated because the clerk was constantly taking calls on her cell phone.
I was waiting in line at the department store return counter, and I got more and more frustrated; calls were constantly being taken by the clerk on her cell phone.
While I waited in line at the department store return counter. I got more and more frustrated; the clerk was constantly taking calls on her cell phone.
I was waiting in line at the department store return counter, so I got more and more frustrated. Calls were constantly being taken by the clerk on her cell phone.

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