English, 04.12.2020 04:10 seasmarie75

My sentences have errors I have too many comma splices, and run on sentences.. can you help me fix it please ? 1. I know plenty of people, especially in my family, that are in the nursing field and they all had a part in inspiring me to become like them one day. (Comma splice)

2. She went through it with the class and I was truly excited to do this project until she pulled out the rubric which explained that we get graded for completing the project and presenting it. My heart completely stopped because I have no communication skills and I was not prepared (run on sentence )

3. I was happy but then I thought to myself, how will I prepare myself in the future to present in college or communicate with others? When I had a doctor’s appointment I was watching how the nurse was handling my checkup and being friendly talking to me with a huge smile on her face asking how my day was and making me feel comfortable.

4. As of right now, my fall semester is ending soon and all I can say is, I’m hoping to do well on the midterms and final exams for all my courses.

5. It can be stressful at times with these classes, there are times where I just want to scream because things get challenging.

6. It can be stressful at times with these classes, there are times where I just want to scream because things get challenging.

7. I was too afraid to ask for help and now my grade has been affected by it.

8. When I graduate in 2024 people will see me walking on that stage getting my diploma and master’s degree.

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