Can you correct the sentences? Please and thank you!!

I know for number one it's Dear, Mrs. Lamont, since it's a name so the comma goes before it. I'm sorry if I'm wrong

1. Dear Mrs. Lamont,

2. Harriet said that you would help me with my report.

3. " Did Juan finish raking your leaves yesterday," asked Mrs. Perez.

4. "Yes," said Mr. Sakamoto, " and he did a fine job."

5. Your friend,

6. Sara Jane said she liked the movie we saw.

7. Jeff wants to know if you will go with him.

8. Zorah shouted, " watch out below!"

9. Who said " give me liberty or give me death?"

10. Dear Senator Smith,

11. Sincerely yours,

12. Did you ask mother if I could stay overnight?

Explanation:

Numbers eight and eleven stay the same

Hope this helps :)

the answer:

in the first part of the story running is all that matters to squeaky. running gives her confidence and defines who she is. at the beginning of the story she says that other kids call her mercury because she runs very fast. in the text she refers to herself as "miss quicksilver".

the line that provides the best evidence that squeaky has self-confidence is

" and i continue with my breathing exercise, strolling down broadway toward the ice cream man on 145th with not a care in the world cause i am miss quicksilver herself".