1. Stephen King provides an example of the way his editor marked up his work. What rationale can you provide for the edits? Would you have made different choices

if you were the editor? Why?

the correct answer is the first option "the bolkshevik revolution". the passage makes reference to many of important events that occured in the revolution, such as the assemblies, in this case the animals are gathered in an assembly after a protest, the murder of fellow partners, the speeches given by the leader of the revolution, among other aspects. the last choice is possible, but in this passage in particular it is not emphasized the fight between the characters, that is the two pigs, that represent lenin and stallin.

showing or suffering from nervousness, fear, or a lack of confidence

with whom will you be coming to the party? this is written correctly.