Mr Jacks and Kate both sat down and looked for a plan. Kate said ''let's all go find some mirrors''. They figured in the airports there are larger mirrors they can use to get in and out with. They used the small mirror to get back in to spread the news. After they got in they rushed to tell people about there discovery. They got all the people to gather the supplies. They all gathered some mirrors from around the place.

They all had a meeting telling everyone about there plan they had made and told them about how they escaped. Mr Jack said ''let's all go split up into different groups''. They made sure everyone was accounted for and their pets and belongings. They all made it out safe and started there old life again and helping more people out of these domes. Kate said ''yay we are out of there safe and sound''.

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invention of the washing machine

in the past, people used sticks and stones or scrub boards to clean their clothing. as it was sweaty, backbreaking work, we owe a world of to james king because he created the model for the modern washing machine in 1851. the most important issue was that this machine cleaned clothes while a person cranked the handle. doing this made people who used it develop strong muscles in their arms. later, in 1908, alva j. fisher created an electric washing machine named thor. this one was not the first automatic washing machine. however, it was one of the most popular models at the time.