Read this excerpt from an argumentative essay. A celebrity’s image is not real. It is an illusion created by makeup, publicists, professional photographers, and the media. Which answer choice provides the best evidence to support the ideas in the excerpt? A recent survey shows that more than half of kids said that their role models are celebrities rather than people they know. Celebrity stylist Johan Blizeck says, "Every celebrity has flaws. They only appear to be perfect because they have lots of professional help." An anonymous celebrity said, "I don’t want to be role model and I never tried to be one. I just want to make money." Examples of celebrities whom kids look up to include professional athletes, movie actors and actresses, models, and musicians.

Me asap it's an e2020 test and it's timedread the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united statesis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.what revision would most strengthen sentence 1?