QUESTION 1 1. Correct the following business messages keeping the 7C's of effective communication in consideration.
i. Revise the following message for conciseness:
In this time of the day, we are sending this announcement to let everyone know that new medicines ordered by the hospital which are mentioned on the list will be available from next month.

ii. Revise the following message for correctness:
Careem has recently launched their service for ‘Wedding Celebrations’ the brand manager was asked to write an e-mail to offer discounted packages and inform of the hospitality it is about to set for. However, the drafted e-mail had a lot of errors. Here’s the sample e-mail content for you:

Dear Customers
We are very upset about lunching a wen project for your needs that are endless we at careem are not ready to lunch our services for wedding packages but is ready to occupy space for celebrations we would like you to uses our news services and be happiest always.
Best
Careem

iii. Rewrite the following message with tact and courtesy:
Sarim,
I wanted to let you know that I don’t appreciate how your team always monopolizes the discussion at our weekly meetings. I have a lot of projects, and I really need time to get my team’s progress discussed as well! So far, thanks to your department, I haven’t been able to do that. Can you make sure they make time for me and my team next week?
Thanks,
Hassan

Read the passage from sugar changed the world. but it is in india, where it was used as an offering in religious and magical ceremonies, that we have the first written record of sugar. long before the first pyramids were built in egypt, the ancient sumerians traded with the people of harappa and mohenjo daro, who lived along the indus river. unfortunately, we are still not able to read the writings left behind from those ancient cities. so the first documents telling us about life in that region come from a much later period. these hindu sacred teachings were probably first gathered together sometime between 1500 and 900 b.c., and were carefully memorized. only hundreds of years later were they finally written down. the hindu writings tell us of a religion in which fire was extremely important. people believed that the gods gave fire to human beings. yet fire was also a way for humans to reach the gods. by placing offerings in a special fire, a priest could turn them into smoke and send them on to the gods. five ingredients were selected for this special burning: milk, cheese, butter, honey, and sugar cane. which details would best fit in a summary of this passage? select two options. "in india . . it was used as an offering in religious and magical ceremonies" "the first written record of sugar" "long before the first pyramids were built in egypt" "gods gave fire to human beings" "a priest could turn them into smoke and send them on to the gods"