Can yall give me your opinion of how i and revise it? **I chose my opinion to forgive
⇒Write a composition in which you state your position about whether conflict is best resolved with revenge or forgiveness

→“The weak can never forget. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong”.-Mahatma Gandhi. A conflict leads to many downsides and getting revenge only makes it worse. I believe that people should forgive because it leads them to a conflict-free life.
→Forgiving makes a person liberate themselves and feel mentally good. Forgiving has many benefits and liberating yourself is one of them. For example, when I fought with my sister for some cute pink fuzzy socks I was mad because I wanted the pink ones instead of the purple ones, keep in mind that my color has always been pink. We were arguing to the point that we started insulting each other and I felt sad because what she was saying hurted me. I decided to just leave it and give her the pink socks, and when I did I just thought to myself how relieving it felt to just let go and keep going with my day. A few hours later she came to my bedroom and asked for forgiveness and i accepted because if i hadn’t i was sure a lot of my energy was going to be wasted and my mood was going to be ruined. This is a personal example of mine and it really shows how it was really convenient to forgive and forget instead of seeking revenge. Others would have preferred revenge, but is it really better than forgiving? No, when people seek revenge they just want to create an endless circle of conflict that involves too much energy and mental instability.
→Additionally, forgiving makes you a bigger person in the sense that it makes you a better one. Imagine your significant other cheats on you, you are not happy because you are disappointed. You think for a moment of revenge and even plan it out, but then you think to yourself if you really want to do that. Seeking revenge will only make you step down instead of looking and feeling better. You forgive and move very far away from that toxic relationship you had. You are now strong and bigger, your ego boosts up and you feel superior. On the other hand I'm absolutely certain that the person will feel sorry even if they don’t show it and they will think of how bad of a decision it was. I have to say that this is a great example because it really puts a person’s perspective and it really is better to step up, forgive and just move on.
→Although many people believe it’s better to seek revenge, they are wrong because it just leads to more problems, and having confused feelings. I implore you to forgive the people around you, give them another chance or forget about it and move on. The time has come to have a pacific life free of rivalry.