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You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article and write a reflection paragraph in which you explain the revisions you made.
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Choose one body paragraph from your informational article to revise.
Copy this paragraph into a new document.
Review your paragraph for coherence. Make sure you have a topic sentence and supporting ideas for this topic.
Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
Review your paragraph for correct English language conventions. Correct any errors.
Write a short reflection paragraph on the revisions you made, describing the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing.
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the original paragraph
the revised paragraph
the reflection on the changes you have made
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My Paragraph:
The Komodo Dragon population is dying out, but there is a plan to help.
But first, why is the Komodo Dragon population dying? a few reasons that they are dying is because of loss of habitat, as an animal expert from National Geographic wrote “People have burned the Komodo dragon’s habitat to clear it for other uses” anyways some other reasons are: tourist’s disturbing Komodo Dragons while they are mating, and tourist’s feeding food Komodo Dragons shouldn’t be eating, which might make the Komodo dragons get sick and die.
To see why this is a problem and who is affected by it, continue reading.
A decrease in Komodo dragon population is a problem because it could lead to an overpopulation in animals ranging from small little mice to large water buffalo, and if there is an overpopulation then those animals might move to villages in search of food, and that will put humans at risk.
To see the solution continue reading.
People can fix this problem by banning tourism against Komodo dragons and ban habitat destruction in all, or at least have an OK from the government to take down a habitat.
And not only that but make a larger punishment for illegal hunting, which should minimize illegal hunting.
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