REWRITE THIS PARAGRAPH(make it better): Children all over the world are using technology now more than ever. This generation of kids is very different from any other generation. Unlike generations from before, this generation can watch tv all day long, have advanced game consoles, and have phones that can do anything. Technology will only continue to evolve and progress. some people might use satires to express the use of phones of children in their daily lives. satire is the use of humor, irony, exaggeration, or ridicule to expose and criticize people satires can be used in plays, novels, and films too. in satire, artists use various techniques of irony, humor, exaggeration, and/or ridicule to convey their purpose.

Children all over the world are using technology a lot more than we used to. This generation of kids is very different from any other generation. Far from generations from before, this generation can watch tv all day long, have advanced game consoles, and have phones that can do anything. Back then, we had books, had to write letters to our friends, went out and took a walk, or drive around with friends. Technology will only continue to evolve and progress. Majority of people might use satires to express how much time children spend on their phones, computers, video games, etc. Satire is the use of humor, irony, exaggeration, or ridicule to expose and criticize people satires can be used in plays, novels, and films too. In satire, artists use a variety of techniques for, irony, humor, exaggeration, and ridicule on to carry their purpose.

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source text: from the sketch here given it will be seen, that our good grandmothers differed considerably in their ideas of a fine figure, from their scantily dressed descendants of the present day. a fine lady, in those times, waddled under more clothes even on a fair summer's day, than would have clad the whole bevy of a modern ball room. nor were they the less admired by the gentlemen in consequence thereof. on the contrary, the greatness of a lover's passion seemed to increase in proportion to the magnitude of its object—and a voluminous damsel, arrayed in a dozen of petticoats, was declared by a low-dutch sonnetteer of the province, to be radiant as a sunflower, and luxuriant as a full blown cabbage. certain it is, that in those days, the heart of a lover could not contain more than one lady at a time; whereas the heart of a modern gallant has often room enough to accommodate half a dozen - - the reason of which i conclude to be, either that the hearts of the gentlemen have grown larger, or the persons of the ladies smaller — this however is a question for physiologists to determine. add punctuation to the following excerpt. writing under the name of diedrich knickerbocker washington irving aimed his potent satire at as diverse topics as political rivals such as thomas jefferson to the very ideal of looking back on the past affectionately: a fine lady, in those times, waddled under more clothes even on a fair summer's day, than would have clad the whole bevy of a modern ball room. a voluminous damsel, arrayed in a dozen of petticoats, was declared by a low-dutch sonnetteer of the province, to be radiant as a sunflower, and luxuriant as a full blown cabbage. in those days, the heart of a lover could not contain more than one lady at a time; whereas the heart of a modern gallant has often room enough to accommodate half a dozen