⚠️⚠️PLEASE READ⚠️⚠️ I want everyone to STOP being so rude and ugly on here this app is to learn and help people and not tear them down! Just because you are behind a screen and no one knows who you are does not mean you can say whatever you want Every one needs to be nicer to make the app better!
Have a nice day and smile

yess i cant agree more i was on here today and this guy call a dude the u know word. this app was amde for studends to help eachother not be racist or tear eachother down or make people feel bad about there bodie! Just beacsue we have differnt skin colors (ex im half asian) or weigh more than so and so DOSENT MEAN WE TEAR EACHOTHER DOWN! im been trying to make a better app bc rn it isnt! Lets be nice to everyone please!

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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