Writing a Narrative: Describing a Problem Quiz Active 1 2 TIME REMAINING 59:15 Read the paragraph from Carla's personal narrative. Raul and I argued about the science project. He crossed his arms over his chest and spoke in a strained voice. Clearly we had different ideas, but which one of us would have an idea about how to solve our differences? Which change to the paragraph would most help Carla paint a picture for readers? O adding details about the science project O replacing the information with dialogue O changing the details used to describe Raul O making better use of first-person pronouns Mark this and return Save and Exit Ne Submit

The major was a little man with upturned mustaches. he had been in the war in libya and wore two wound-stripes. he said that if the thing went well he would see that i was decorated. i said i hoped it would go well but that he was too kind. i asked him if there was a big dugout where the drivers could stay and he sent a soldier to show me. i went with him and found the dugout, which was very good. the drivers were with it and i left them there. what effect does hemingway’s limited use of adjectives have? it slows down the narration by interrupting the action. it makes the few descriptive words he does use more vivid and forceful. it makes the narrator seem powerless and insincere. it prevents the readers from filling in the details with their own experiences.

According to the police officer, the car accident could not have been avoided.

Read this passage from "the pedestrian" by ray bradbury: which sentence best describes the overall impact of the setting?