(Peotry is indeed English don't report this, there is no reason. Be considerate and have a nice day thank you.) #10

Fire like a forge in your- your eyes unheard borgeous battle cries
Is this what air feels like- you can see right through me
Is this what clear fears- like all my missed opportunities
Is this how invisibility walks- down corridors unnoticed
Is this why everything i hold- drops and shatters till it's broken

There is no worse and there is no better- there is no in between
You can't be whole and you can’t be empty and the world doesn't see- glasses half full

This makes so much sense gem good job <33

love~Grey

Explanation:

I-I'm speechlessI just found this poem, and i am completely shocked how good of a poet you are!

This poem is a very deep and powerful message portraying emotions beyond words...

paine is arguying that they had tried everything before coming to the conclusion that they needed to fight for their freedom.

argument: "every quiet method for peace hath been ineffectual."

claim 1: "our prayers have been rejected with disdain; and only tended to convince us, that nothing flatters vanity, or confirms obstinacy in kings more than repeated petitioning and nothing hath contributed more than that very measure to make the kings of europe absolute."

claim 2: "wherefore, since nothing but blows will do, for god’s sake, let us come to a final separation, and not leave the next generation to be cutting throats, under the violated unmeaning names of parent and child."

what was your story about? i remember this from my language arts class in flvs! i had ms. rosemeyer.