Revise the following email so that it demonstrates formal English. what up, lil bro? how u been? we should totes try 2 get a ride to da mall next week n then do sumthin nice 4 mom her birthday is like next week??? lmk what you think we shud get her…flowers n stuff like that is s boring. Luv ya, Sis

Hello, little brother. How are you doing? I think that we should ask someone if they could drop us off at the mall next week, and then make a commitment to doing something nice for her. Her birthday is around next week, is it not? In my opinion, we should get her something sentimental. What do you think we should get her? I feel like flowers and traditional presents is bland. I love you, little sister.

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it should be

hard work gives a person a sense of satisfaction; likewise, it to pay the bills.

so the punctuation is not correct.