Which is the best revision of the conclusion? Read the excerpt from a student's essay.
Video games can be fun and educational if used wisely.
Unfortunately, they can also be a time waster. School
students have to be careful and use video games wisely.
Some video games are violent. Some children play
video games too often and don't do more productive
activities. I hope you can all be more careful with video
games
O Kids need to watch out for dangerous video games.
Kids must use good judgement when playing video
games.
Kids should spend more time playing video games.
o Kids will be happier if they never play video games.

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Which excerpt from the war of the worldseffectively reveals how the author relates the climax of the narrative through the narrator's thoughts? the war of the worldsall this had happened with such swiftness that i had stood motionless, dumbfounded and dazzled by the flashes of light. had that death swept through a full circle, it must inevitably have slain me in my surprise. but it passed and spared me, and left the night about me suddenly dark and unfamiliar.and then, with a renewed horror, i saw a round, black object bobbing up and down on the edge of the pit. it was the head of the shopman who had fallen in, but showing as a little black object against the hot western sun.at that time it was quite clear in my own mind that the thing had come from the planet mars, but i judged it improbable that it contained any living creature. i thought the unscrewing might be automatic.my mind ran fancifully on the possibilities of its containing manuscript, on the difficulties in translation that might arise, whether we should find coins and models in it, and so forth. yet it was a little too large for assurance on this idea. i felt an impatience to see it opened.