Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout. Passage
Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater,
and creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students
provide feedback on their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that
peer review is a valuable teaching tool that not only helps student artists
reimagine their work but also pushes student critics to develop their taste and
technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong with this is that sometimes
people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be nice. When that
happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peer-review process can become
unproductive