What Is a good clincher for a essay talking about if teens should be able to play dangerous sports? here is the ex conclusion for what I have!

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a good hook would be,

sports. we've all played them once or twice before and many would say that they are quite enjoyable. but dangerous at he same time. here i'm going to dive into some details that highlight weather or not teens should play dangerous sports.

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unrelated sentences to be eliminated?

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.